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PokerStars Game #36531045024: Tournament #237011154, $2.00+$0.20 USD Hold'em No Limit - Level X (300/600) - 2009/12/11 1:43:15 ET
Table '237011154 36' 9-max Seat #6 is the button
Seat 1: Sharantyr (17172 in chips)
Seat 2: rackplease (32340 in chips)
Seat 3: brat1_77 (16733 in chips)
Seat 4: aguahombre2 (1030 in chips)
Seat 5: tooflyry2006 (7032 in chips)
Seat 6: magonagle (26446 in chips)
Seat 7: stenter.krsk (29338 in chips)
Seat 8: raynertheman (9725 in chips)
Seat 9: NoMoreCalls (12159 in chips)
Sharantyr: posts the ante 50
rackplease: posts the ante 50
brat1_77: posts the ante 50
aguahombre2: posts the ante 50
tooflyry2006: posts the ante 50
magonagle: posts the ante 50
stenter.krsk: posts the ante 50
raynertheman: posts the ante 50
NoMoreCalls: posts the ante 50
stenter.krsk: posts small blind 300
raynertheman: posts big blind 600
*** HOLE CARDS ***
Dealt to Sharantyr [Ad Ah]
NoMoreCalls said, "so wht u had?"
NoMoreCalls: folds
Sharantyr: raises 2400 to 3000
brat1_77 said, "kj"
rackplease: folds
brat1_77: folds
aguahombre2: folds
tooflyry2006: calls 3000
magonagle: folds
stenter.krsk: folds
raynertheman: folds
*** FLOP *** [3h
Js 7h]
Sharantyr: bets 4200
tooflyry2006: calls 3982 and is all-in
Uncalled bet (218) returned to Sharantyr
*** TURN *** [3h
Js 7h] [2d]
*** RIVER *** [3h
Js 7h 2d] [Td]
tooflyry2006 said, "ng"
*** SHOW DOWN ***
Sharantyr: shows [Ad Ah] (a pair of Aces)
tooflyry2006: shows [Jc Ac] (a pair of Jacks)
Sharantyr collected 15314 from pot
*** SUMMARY ***
Total pot 15314 | Rake 0
Board [3h
Js 7h 2d Td]
Seat 1: Sharantyr showed [Ad Ah] and won (15314) with a pair of Aces
Seat 2: rackplease folded before Flop (didn't bet)
Seat 3: brat1_77 folded before Flop (didn't bet)
Seat 4: aguahombre2 folded before Flop (didn't bet)
Seat 5: tooflyry2006 showed [Jc Ac] and lost with a pair of Jacks
Seat 6: magonagle (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)
Seat 7: stenter.krsk (small blind) folded before Flop
Seat 8: raynertheman (big blind) folded before Flop
Seat 9: NoMoreCalls folded before Flop (didn't bet)
~Curtsy~
Shar